My sincerest apologies for taking like five years to respond on here.
That is an incredible dream though. I've often marveled at our brain's abilities to simulate language during dreams. So many times I've been reading or writing things in my sleep, and in those nether-moments they are full of brilliance and complexity and then get spat into my waking mind as said loogies
I like the idea of two poems being in dialogue like that. I'll have to experiment with such forms, as should you.
How is your life as of late, Danya?
Also, since I have your attention, would it be at all possible for me to get your mailing address? I have a package of sorts I'd like to send your way in the near future.